potatoboy37's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bunnykill 5 Part 1]

I'll get that bitch a gun blade!

Bitches love gun blades!

Mottis responds:

Okay, I lol'd at that one

[Rainbow Prism- Carry On]

Okay. going to be a blunt.

not terrible.
the song was cool, which boosted your score.
the animation quality varied greatly
the whole thing should have matched the quality of the last 10 seconds or so
Guitar girl was vibrating, not dancing, not playing the guitar
tweening, everywhere, not saying don't tween, just make it less obvious by using more frames.
lip syncing was good, hand syncing was bad.
background lights, had definite shape, should have covered the whole screen /multiple layers of color.

Overall it was ok. Definitely an average flash, and should fit right in on newgrounds. however, if you want to improve, i suggest disabling your tween tool and draw frame by frame. Not only will you learn how to draw faster, you won't have to worry about "jellification" and you will actually be able to show things like spinning around while dancing.

eithmableura12 responds:

Understood. I was being lazy with the guitar girl. I easily get lazy with frame by frame, so I guess I'll try that out once in a while.

[A Snowman Short]

Audio mix from Dragon Ball Z

Either you left it in or someone hacked it in there, either way there is a very loud dbz audio playing over your characters. it disappears if you refresh the page though. >.> i would look into that...otherwise, it was a nice little joke.

CyanSandwich responds:

It's an API glitch apparently.

[Vapour]

always keep the cover on your tank..

interesting... the main question i think is that did he commit suicide when he didn't have any water, or was he sleeping the whole time and his mind subconsciously killed him? It was very well done, and i like the "creatures". i did notice that you cut to the wrong scene during the fall. when the camera zooms out to the creatures, he is still standing at the door despite having already fallen.

Brown-Acid responds:

nah that shot was intentional....probably badly timed ....was speeding up the shots at that point

[Space Cash 1200]

Barmaglot, you don't come here often enough

otherwise you would have read the newgrounds motto by now "Everything. by Everyone." In other words, if it can be converted to a flash file, it will be accepted by newgrounds. Only after it has passed the portal can it be blammed for incorrect content or other such nonsense.

On to the flash it's self:
I thought it was very well done, there was never any "sudden jumps" when the character was moving and i thought your theme came across very well, despite the requirement to make it look crappy. If i was your teacher you would have gotten at least a 90, especially for the special effects! XD

grabbelfant responds:

Thanks for the review, don't mind people like barmaglot, he just want's to see the same stick and sprite crap all the time. I can understand that, oh wait I can't.

but thanks for the review. I don't get a mark for it, but it will be played at a small filmfestival and there is a n award, so maybe..

[SNAP SHOT]

Reminds me of the guy from Cowboy Bebop

crap what was his name again? anyway it was a cool trick and i may have to figure out how to do it. probably would save action heroes from a lot of stand offs too!

QuasimodoxArt responds:

Spike.

You are not going to try it at home for real.... are you?

[Try Walking on Water Now]

Nice to see someone with balls on this site

My hat's off to you sir, as for the actual animation, ehh average.
I think you could have extended it by having him kill himself, be resurrected, and when he comes back have huge, i'm talking improbably massive amounts of weapons on him, just to kill that one guy. That would be funny. or if you showed jesus running from the car, thinks he's safe on the water but then the car catches him anyway. i understand this was just a quickie so hope to see better work in the next one.

falling responds:

Thanks for the review and compliment heh. I do have plans to continue this forward. :)

[The Many Mario's Collab]

haha chemistry joke

oxidants +metal Mario= rusted metal Mario

VintageBro responds:

School + Animation = Well... That animation ?

[Leif Inc.]

awesome

I'm a pretty outdoorsy kinda guy so i would prolly buy all three...
just one question, does the watch tell time? cuz that would suck if it didn't

gildedguy responds:

Of course! What's a watch without the time?
Thx for the feedback

[The Clown Downstairs]

sssssssssssooooooooooooo creepy dude..

i was already afraid of my basement, now the dark, clowns and bugs too?!? im going to my panic room for the next two weeks.....

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

haha thanks for the review